Second-grade Sweetie Kiley wrote a story and really wanted to see it published.
So, Grandpa proudly presents “Oreo” by Kiley.
Cups rattled and colored leaves blew. My purple hat went flying and then my dog turned bright pink and grew five red eyes! His claws grew three times bigger while his teeth became sharper and sharper! My poor little Oreo! (That’s his name.) Oreo’s nose turned dark blue as the wind howled and whistled so hard my blue eyes stung and my hands were frozen in place. Then I looked down…I really was freezing! Oh no, I crack! My entire body has frozen. The monster dog has buried me in the blowing bushes! Oreo stood guard as the moaning wind whistled louder than a train. Suddenly, the sun came out and melted me! Oreo barked and then disappeared in a cloud of black smoke. Venders in the street yelled and pink flowers bloomed. A long beautiful rainbow covered the green land. I was happy until the wind barked and a cat snuck up behind me –
To be continued…
That’s a impressive story. She will be the next George Lucas.
Second grade?
I teach 6-8th grades. Most of them can’t write like this. Wow.
What a scary story! But then it gets better….
When is part 2? I have to know how it turns out!
Oreo is my hero for saving Kiley from the monster dog.
Wonderfully creative.
Kiley, you are very talented. I loved this story! Love, aunt Veronica
Tell Kiley she has impressed fan waiting anxiously for the next installment.
I can hardly wait to hear the next part!
I so get that she is going as Pippi Longstocking now!